Friday, 8 March 2013

#FridayFlash - Black Dog

My name is Samuel Phipps and I offer my position as a clerk within a firm of engineers as testament to my sanity. I can offer no other evidence as to the veracity of the events which I am about to relate, other than the testimony I shall lay before you.

I was staying with my brother in a small Norfolk village; he has been recently married and I had promised to visit with him and his dear wife. On the night before I was due to take my leave, bound once more for London, I had been visiting another friend on the edge of the town. My brother could not make the visit due to illness, and I found myself in a position of having to leave my friend's lodgings without arrangements for transportation being made.

It is not so large a village that one feels compelled to travel by coach, or even horseback, and at that moment in my visit, both were extravagances which I could ill afford. I deemed it prudent to make the short journey on foot, and took my leave of my gracious host. Moments before I left, he offered the suggestion that I might shorten my return journey by some ten minutes or so by cutting through the graveyard, instead of following the meandering lane. I thanked him for his suggestion, and stepped out into the cold March air.

I had not gone three paces when a small hand tugged on my arm. I am not accustomed to frights, or extended indulgence of my imagination, but the suddenness of the act startled me. I looked down and saw that the hand belonged to that of my friend's maid. She had been returning to the house from the chicken coop when she heard my friend's suggestion, and she begged me to ignore the advice, and take my intended route. I told her that I wished to return home and if my friend's suggestion would allow me to do so all the quicker, then I would follow it. She told me that the graveyard was the haunt of the infamous 'Black Shuck', and she pleaded with me to take the longer route, "all the better to avoid 'im". The little maid seemed convinced that my soul would be lost should I encounter the beast, seen only in the graveyard on nights such as these, and I saw no way to placate her that would not involve a lie. I assured her that I would take the long walk instead, and left her clasping her hands in gratitude.

I am not a man prone to such notions, but I regretted my choice the instant I set foot in the graveyard. A narrow gate admitted me in the rear wall, and a winding path cut a swathe between a host of stones. I normally find such places to be fascinating records of human experience, but with a cold wind at my back, and frost in the air, I found I had little time to read the stones. I fancied I heard footsteps, yet when I turned my head, I saw nothing in the moving shadows.

Something howled in the darkness behind me, and I glanced over my shoulder to discover its source. The path was empty. I heaved a sigh of relief and turned back to the path ahead.

A large black dog blocked my way. Around three feet high, it stood perhaps seven yards away, with ragged fur and enormous paws. Red eyes burned in its impassive face, its features akin to those of a mastiff. It did not snarl, or bare its teeth as I feared it would. It regarded me with vague interest, but I sensed no real malice on its part.  I recalled the fevered words of the maid and wondered if this was the Black Shuck of which she spoke. I found I could not move, bound to the spot as I was with fright.

The dog walked along the path towards me, carrying itself with the dignity one more associates with cats than dogs. It regarded me all the while with its red eyes, and I could not even close my own to prevent my seeing its approach. Some nefarious agency kept my eyes wide open. The dog sniffed my hand in the manner of any normal hound, and lifted its gaze to meet my own. I saw nothing in its eyes, no danger or evil, nor willful defiance of the Lord. The dog simply...was.

With no warning, it stood on its hind legs, and pressed its paws against my chest. I would have started for I felt no weight behind the gesture, no sudden movement that may cause me to stumble backward. The dog gazed into my eyes, and let out a single bark. An instant later, my eyes closed and I regained control of my limbs. When I opened my eyes, the dog was gone, and I was alone in the graveyard.

I hurried home, and arrived at the same moment that I surely would have done had I taken the longer route. I did not tell my brother or his wife of my ordeal, and I retired to bed, pleading a headache. I did not wake for two days, and when I finally did awake, my brother's wife explained in halting terms that the coach I was to have taken overturned on the journey, killing its occupants.

I returned to London a day later, somewhat fearful of the coach, and discovered that a fire destroyed my lodgings on the day I should have returned. A host of such tales played out before me, and soon my acquaintances congratulated me on my run of good fortune. I smiled and shook their hands, agreeing in turn, but I could not bring myself to speak of the events in the graveyard, nor tell of the two mysterious marks that had appeared on my chest, marks shaped like those of cloven hooves.

14 comments:

Sonya Clark said...

Icy, you are the Queen of Creepy! This is an excellent, atmospheric piece.

John Wiswell said...

Saints preserve me, but my favorite elements was the dated voice. There's something so pleasant about overwritten and overspoken older sensibilities in describing horrors. Thanks for sharing!

Sulci Collective said...

I agree with John, you do historical voice so well. I was a bit relieved at this story, when I saw the title I thought it might be that Black Dog Winston Churchill talked about plaguing him

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Tony Noland said...

Terrific historical fiction voice, Icy. I can't help but wonder what that black dog is saving the narrator for.

Larry Kollar said...

I'm with the others, the historical voice was perfect - not 100% accurate, which would have made it overblown, but it put me in the right period to enjoy this. I'm left wondering: did the ghost dog actually do him a favor, or save him for something far worse?

ganymeder said...

Holy hell! His streak of good luck seems very suspicious!

Bevimus said...

This reminded me of a Sherlock Holmes story, but without the elementary conclusion. I agree with John about the voice but I also love the supernatural dog itself and the uneasy feelings at the end that maybe he's been marked for something else. Loved it.

daniellelapaglia said...

To echo the sentiments above, you certainly do have a way with historic voice. And this was seriously creepy. Not the twist I expected, but I liked it.

jackkholt said...

Good boy! Or is it? Love the voice, love the language, love the story. Thank yoooouuuu, Icy!

Daezarkian13 said...

Terrific stuff, Miss Sedgwick. Love the last line.

Kath said...

As others have already said, the voice is excellent. This felt like a tale by Wilkie Collins. And has he been marked so that some things associated with him are destroyed or is he being saved for something much more devastating? Will the dog's master or keeper visit him when that time draws near? This gave me real chills - Must remember to read your flash during daylight hours!!

Sue said...

Made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. Good job!




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Icy Sedgwick said...

Sonya - Thanks!

John - I do my best...

Marc - I like writing historical pieces.

Tony - There must be a reason!

Larry - I'm not from that period so I could never have gotten the voice accurate.

Cathy - It does indeed!

Bev - My tribute to the Hound of the Baskervilles!

Danni - I might continue it...

Jack - I don't think I'd like to play fetch with him.

Steven - I do like a good punchline.

Kath - I love Wilkie Collins :)

Sue - Thanks!

Cindy Vaskova said...

Aah, historically voiced, Baskerville shaped, creepy horror story - lovely, lovely written! Well told, Icy.
If you have thoughts of indeed continuing this piece, I vote yes!

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