Thursday, 22 March 2012

Lucky Seven Meme

I was tagged by both Helen Howell and Sonya Clark for a Lucky Seven Excerpt.

The rules are simple:

1. Go to page 77 in your current manuscript
2. Go to line 7
3. Copy down the next seven lines as they are - no cheating
4. Tag 7 other authors (Done on Facebook)

This is from To Kill A Dead Man, the sequel to The Guns of Retribution. I know it looks like a lot but that's literally seven lines in the front I'm using!

“Boss, pardon me for sayin’ so, but you’re normally so calm and collected. Only this stuff with Miss Marsden has got you all riled up. Forget about what Marvel said we did, or didn’t do. Right now, we gotta find McEavy, get Bess back, and hopefully find Miss Marsden.” 

He looked me straight in the eye, his blue eyes all serious and earnest. I’d never seen Billy look like that, and he might as well have slapped me. I took a step backward, and shook my head, trying to clear away all the cobwebs. Billy was right. I was getting carried away, and I needed to focus. I was no good to Peggy if I went off half-cocked.


If you liked that, maybe you'll enjoy The Guns of Retribution!

6 comments:

Cathy Olliffe-Webster said...

Woo HOO! This is rockin' stuff, Icy! I LOVE your characters's names - Peggy and Bess and Billy et al. Fabulous! And you have such a sassy style. Love it!

Kemari said...

Love it! And I second Cathy...I love the names.

Helen said...

This is a great Icy - looking forward to the sequel!

alannahmurphy said...

Makes me want to go read your book again Icy. Thanks for the tag as well.

tom gillespie said...

Gimme that book.. I want it now!!

Eric J. Krause said...

Excellent little scene. Sure shows action is coming!

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