Friday, 19 March 2010

Fiction Friday #5

This story has been taken down as it's out for submission!

10 comments:

Marisa Birns said...

Have a very bad feeling that she is going to light the candles!

Nice pacing and dialogue. Very enjoyable...and spooky...story.

Well done.

Icy Sedgwick said...

Thank you!

I do love my ghost stories. Maybe one day I'll explain how the tweed man came to own a hand of glory!

newtowritinggirl said...

It would be really clever if you explained it using of the prompts for Fiction Friday!

afullnessinbrevity said...

I wonder if this is how "Thing" from The Addams Family met its end?
Great pace and dialogue.
Adam

keithsramblings said...

I think something bad is about to happen! An intriguing piece.

mazzz_in_Leeds said...

Can you get her to light the candles please? I want to see what happens :-)

Icy Sedgwick said...

I've always been fascinated by the Hand of Glory...maybe we'll meet Nikki again and see what goes on!

Emma Newman said...

I loved this - simple, the two shoppers are sketched out efficiently and without messing about. And I love the fact that you've left it up to the reader to worry about the hand. Ace :)

Sam said...

I really, really enjoyed this, and I too want to see what happens when those candles are lit. I mean, she is going to light them, right?

Icy Sedgwick said...

She might not...but maybe someone else will!

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