Friday, 19 March 2010

Fiction Friday #5

This story has been taken down as it's out for submission!
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10 comments:

  1. Marisa Birns19 March 2010 at 14:07

    Have a very bad feeling that she is going to light the candles!

    Nice pacing and dialogue. Very enjoyable...and spooky...story.

    Well done.

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  2. Icy Sedgwick19 March 2010 at 14:37

    Thank you!

    I do love my ghost stories. Maybe one day I'll explain how the tweed man came to own a hand of glory!

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  3. Anonymous19 March 2010 at 17:35

    It would be really clever if you explained it using of the prompts for Fiction Friday!

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  4. Anonymous19 March 2010 at 21:46

    I wonder if this is how "Thing" from The Addams Family met its end?
    Great pace and dialogue.
    Adam

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  5. Anonymous19 March 2010 at 22:06

    I think something bad is about to happen! An intriguing piece.

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  6. mazzz_in_Leeds21 March 2010 at 12:27

    Can you get her to light the candles please? I want to see what happens :-)

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  7. Icy Sedgwick21 March 2010 at 12:48

    I've always been fascinated by the Hand of Glory...maybe we'll meet Nikki again and see what goes on!

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  8. Emma Newman21 March 2010 at 13:49

    I loved this - simple, the two shoppers are sketched out efficiently and without messing about. And I love the fact that you've left it up to the reader to worry about the hand. Ace :)

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  9. Sam21 March 2010 at 13:59

    I really, really enjoyed this, and I too want to see what happens when those candles are lit. I mean, she is going to light them, right?

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  10. Icy Sedgwick21 March 2010 at 20:02

    She might not...but maybe someone else will!

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