tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post8632763887905404202..comments2024-03-23T15:28:15.198+00:00Comments on Icy's Blunt Pencil: Chaos and ChanceIcy Sedgwickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-53666306453999234442010-07-12T22:42:47.422+01:002010-07-12T22:42:47.422+01:00Loved the ending! Very funny.Loved the ending! Very funny.Virginia Moffatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071059148315715405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-42453510303506691242010-07-11T23:16:17.879+01:002010-07-11T23:16:17.879+01:00Excellent! Had me laughing all the way through.Excellent! Had me laughing all the way through.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-72903684280629967152010-07-11T20:40:05.748+01:002010-07-11T20:40:05.748+01:00Hilarious! I think with his choice in women he sho...Hilarious! I think with his choice in women he should be saying "just shoot me" right about now...Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-53987883393531685712010-07-11T04:42:15.274+01:002010-07-11T04:42:15.274+01:00I'm still chuckling over this one. The next su...I'm still chuckling over this one. The next super hero/villian through the door would have to be Andrew's friend, or his mom.Donald Conradhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11299995538611948494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-3824114773495726452010-07-11T02:43:38.207+01:002010-07-11T02:43:38.207+01:00That was a fun read. The awkwardness of the scenar...That was a fun read. The awkwardness of the scenario came through and the line <em>"I am not Jennifer. I am the Angel of Order"</em> made me laugh out loud.Walthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09181882400222796147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-50253776249656460972010-07-11T02:04:50.716+01:002010-07-11T02:04:50.716+01:00I'm glad you like it. :-)I'm glad you like it. :-)Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-49370174051902731692010-07-11T01:26:03.880+01:002010-07-11T01:26:03.880+01:00Ha! I loved this. Very sharp. Very witty. "Wh...Ha! I loved this. Very sharp. Very witty. "What are you going for? Best of twenty?" So funny.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-63491733245364093872010-07-10T22:10:22.473+01:002010-07-10T22:10:22.473+01:00Ooh I could try illustrating it. Then you'd ge...Ooh I could try illustrating it. Then you'd get to see how lame Sheila's costume is!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-27672381902745485752010-07-10T02:40:05.343+01:002010-07-10T02:40:05.343+01:00Sassy. I can tell you had a lot of fun with this ...Sassy. I can tell you had a lot of fun with this story. I like the idea of illustrations.Shellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068094486297918345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-41073776556162103332010-07-10T02:06:09.390+01:002010-07-10T02:06:09.390+01:00Very funny. You need to illustrate this :-) Maybe ...Very funny. You need to illustrate this :-) Maybe have two views. One of how she see's herself then his. Then how they view the Angel of Order. Great storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-64022048117170443832010-07-10T01:52:56.362+01:002010-07-10T01:52:56.362+01:00Excellent, and just too funny. Love everything abo...Excellent, and just too funny. Love everything about it, but the moment his new girlfriend walked in to save him was hilarious.<br /><br />Great story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-52632134664388977092010-07-10T01:14:15.177+01:002010-07-10T01:14:15.177+01:00Sorry, mine's here.
http://johnpender.net/2010...Sorry, mine's here.<br />http://johnpender.net/2010/07/fiction-friday-163/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-40134154744446172242010-07-10T01:13:12.693+01:002010-07-10T01:13:12.693+01:00This is too funny! Love it.This is too funny! Love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-3084336229408129682010-07-09T22:29:57.050+01:002010-07-09T22:29:57.050+01:00I wanted to take the piss out of Two-Face but ende...I wanted to take the piss out of Two-Face but ended up taking the piss out of vigilantes. Whoops!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-48947520428977992352010-07-09T22:15:42.493+01:002010-07-09T22:15:42.493+01:00Very enjoyable. My favorite line: "You call y...Very enjoyable. My favorite line: "You call yourself Chaos, but then you do something you've clearly spent time planning. Not very chaotic, is it?" Loved it.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11397525011462974857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-72235798158180149652010-07-09T20:59:52.701+01:002010-07-09T20:59:52.701+01:00What a great story! Very, very funny. The names yo...What a great story! Very, very funny. The names you chose cracked me up so much!Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-11289300668211688212010-07-09T20:48:20.300+01:002010-07-09T20:48:20.300+01:00Glad people liked this! I need to do more superher...Glad people liked this! I need to do more superhero stuff!!!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-80086101830022383112010-07-09T19:05:05.245+01:002010-07-09T19:05:05.245+01:00i like the twist at the end. very clever.i like the twist at the end. very clever.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06488832373580617482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-90922381325994358842010-07-09T18:03:38.666+01:002010-07-09T18:03:38.666+01:00Maybe he could troll for normal women at the Hall ...Maybe he could troll for normal women at the Hall of Justice. Where they act like superheroes, maybe they think they're normal people.<br /><br />Really enjoyed this, Icy. I could go for more less-normal women.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-40829285593488453462010-07-09T13:41:31.484+01:002010-07-09T13:41:31.484+01:00Hilarious! The word choice and pacing were perfec...Hilarious! The word choice and pacing were perfect. Nice work!Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-4510864213467023062010-07-09T12:52:43.246+01:002010-07-09T12:52:43.246+01:00I shall be thinking of a catchphrase all day!I shall be thinking of a catchphrase all day!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-75860303931576791072010-07-09T12:43:49.241+01:002010-07-09T12:43:49.241+01:00This is so damn near perfect. I am such a fan of y...This is so damn near perfect. I am such a fan of your creativity; it is the exploration of irony and the ridiculousness of the situation that had me laughing out loud.<br />Now that you're a superhero, you are going to need a catchphrase.<br />Adam BAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-71393681085525666352010-07-09T10:44:54.920+01:002010-07-09T10:44:54.920+01:00Haha that cracked me up!Haha that cracked me up!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16675799736197726920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-23323460809455270302010-07-09T09:58:23.672+01:002010-07-09T09:58:23.672+01:00[SNORT!] This was hilarious. Poor lady. She should...[SNORT!] This was hilarious. Poor lady. She should take up a different job. Something less exacting. Great work!Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-670398113125021402010-07-09T09:56:24.134+01:002010-07-09T09:56:24.134+01:00Ah, glad I've been making people laugh!
My w...Ah, glad I've been making people laugh! <br /><br />My work here is done.<br /><br />*dons cape and zooms off into the sunny Friday morning*Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.com