tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post7493479309918358016..comments2024-03-23T15:28:15.198+00:00Comments on Icy's Blunt Pencil: #FridayFlash - ContagionIcy Sedgwickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-68613203349761467472013-05-21T17:46:45.747+01:002013-05-21T17:46:45.747+01:00Oooohhh... nicely spooky. It reads like a dramatis...Oooohhh... nicely spooky. It reads like a dramatisation of a traditional story, to be sure. Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-5185227097207300542013-05-20T03:37:46.489+01:002013-05-20T03:37:46.489+01:00I do hope you turn this into a novella. It will be...I do hope you turn this into a novella. It will be interesting to see what happens to Pharrigan.Chuck Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17363611239865782087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-52671121696622404352013-05-19T16:12:42.223+01:002013-05-19T16:12:42.223+01:00Excellent story! I think it would be much harder k...Excellent story! I think it would be much harder knowing you had to wait than being taken right there. Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-1825292332025703692013-05-18T18:26:09.885+01:002013-05-18T18:26:09.885+01:00Excellent piece. I love the descriptions, and the ...Excellent piece. I love the descriptions, and the story is creative and riveting. Love that you dabbled in something a little different.Shellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068094486297918345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-89724733181957395882013-05-18T14:52:31.111+01:002013-05-18T14:52:31.111+01:00shudder.. Pharrigan is noble and a worthy leader o...shudder.. Pharrigan is noble and a worthy leader of men! Bravo - this was fantastic and do turn it into a novella.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-56694679063983470042013-05-18T05:26:29.946+01:002013-05-18T05:26:29.946+01:00Brilliant work. Lady Contagion is at once attracti...Brilliant work. Lady Contagion is at once attractive and repulsive.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-11199495423178197382013-05-17T19:55:30.951+01:002013-05-17T19:55:30.951+01:00Dark, but dignified. Strange that she should have ...Dark, but dignified. Strange that she should have to bargain to gain his service, but perhaps her honor guard must serve willingly?Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-10570005617359131202013-05-17T18:48:23.422+01:002013-05-17T18:48:23.422+01:00I really enjoyed that! I like Pharrigan and Lady C...I really enjoyed that! I like Pharrigan and Lady C. They seem pretty awesome characters. I think a novella about them would be awesome.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15222486877231051427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-38253758307399343412013-05-17T17:44:01.571+01:002013-05-17T17:44:01.571+01:00I'm glad everyone has enjoyed this one so far....I'm glad everyone has enjoyed this one so far. It's a bit different from what I normally do but I think it's just a combination of all the different strands of input I've had lately. Maybe it will become a novella...Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-91231242928656335792013-05-17T14:43:11.115+01:002013-05-17T14:43:11.115+01:00Dark. Deliciously dark.
I liked the Lord who was ...Dark. Deliciously dark.<br /><br />I liked the Lord who was willing to sacrifice himself for his men. Seems like most of those guys, down through history, would sell out their mothers for minor gains.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-4486761622337936602013-05-17T12:19:47.027+01:002013-05-17T12:19:47.027+01:00Such great imagery in this I could smell the sickn...Such great imagery in this I could smell the sickness and death, (not pleasant but hey...). <br />Lady Contagion, I believe, is one your best characters Icy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-62497153474006042342013-05-17T09:31:08.631+01:002013-05-17T09:31:08.631+01:00Very good Icy! Love the descriptions on the lady, ...Very good Icy! Love the descriptions on the lady, and this I feel could be the beginning of a novella. Think about it do. ^_^Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-43161903300638385782013-05-17T08:04:39.665+01:002013-05-17T08:04:39.665+01:00Interesting to see you playing with such a terse n...Interesting to see you playing with such a terse narrative style, many more clipped sentences than I remember in your work. It gave the story a harsher feeling for me. I dug it.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-26137975437613989122013-05-17T07:59:06.994+01:002013-05-17T07:59:06.994+01:00really loved the description of Lady C & her h...really loved the description of Lady C & her horse. Definitely up there with your best icy<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-73406546277466409022013-05-17T06:23:54.892+01:002013-05-17T06:23:54.892+01:00I loved this one, Icy, especially the last two par...I loved this one, Icy, especially the last two paragraphs. Tearing the strips of her shadow is awesome imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-61621457916089724542013-05-17T01:26:32.842+01:002013-05-17T01:26:32.842+01:00Wow. This was fantastic.
Lady Contagion, that'...Wow. This was fantastic. <br />Lady Contagion, that's a new one for me. pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.com