tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post6039734225940272207..comments2024-03-23T15:28:15.198+00:00Comments on Icy's Blunt Pencil: #FridayFlash - The IntruderIcy Sedgwickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-7524750160877452212013-09-07T14:45:24.755+01:002013-09-07T14:45:24.755+01:00Love this. It's great as is and has so much po...Love this. It's great as is and has so much potential to add more.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-55878692081211323972013-09-02T17:23:40.732+01:002013-09-02T17:23:40.732+01:00I like the idea of the shadow being not-quite-huma...I like the idea of the shadow being not-quite-human, having its own loyalties and morality.Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-36755252619062921442013-09-01T05:23:01.114+01:002013-09-01T05:23:01.114+01:00Nice twist. I wish my shadow would watch my back l...Nice twist. I wish my shadow would watch my back like that. Wait a minute....liminalfictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08762010680878316253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-31878660757169695422013-08-31T20:42:10.866+01:002013-08-31T20:42:10.866+01:00Originally made me think of Peter Pan, but then it...Originally made me think of Peter Pan, but then it took a very not-a-child's-story twist. Loved it.Shellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068094486297918345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-18512884931166031542013-08-31T00:17:43.709+01:002013-08-31T00:17:43.709+01:00Love the idea of a shadow taking matters into her ...Love the idea of a shadow taking matters into her own hands. So curious about what will happen when Edith wakes up! Valerie Gearyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165554338889917253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-79406366937158587572013-08-30T16:40:35.086+01:002013-08-30T16:40:35.086+01:00Won't Edith be surprised? Or maybe Edith think...Won't Edith be surprised? Or maybe Edith thinks she has a ghost? <br /><br />Like the idea of a protective shadow. I thought the shadow was going to take over her or something. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-90824260943548553182013-08-30T15:58:18.898+01:002013-08-30T15:58:18.898+01:00Cathy - I don't think the shadow thought that ...Cathy - I don't think the shadow thought that far ahead!<br /><br />Larry - Maybe she's used to it!<br /><br />Peggy - I'm a big believer in good opening lines.<br /><br />Tony - Would they fight each other?Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-55970142103498510452013-08-30T14:39:57.502+01:002013-08-30T14:39:57.502+01:00Would that we all had such shadows to protect us!Would that we all had such shadows to protect us!Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-21049081268898059382013-08-30T13:40:59.672+01:002013-08-30T13:40:59.672+01:00A shadow that can protect. Like Larry, I'm won...A shadow that can protect. Like Larry, I'm wondering how Edith will react when she awakes to a body on the floor. <br />What will the shadow do next?<br />BTW, the first sentence was great. pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-8194932492794498202013-08-30T13:18:17.703+01:002013-08-30T13:18:17.703+01:00Wow! Such a helpful shadow; Peter Pan had to have ...Wow! Such a helpful shadow; Peter Pan had to have Wendy stitch his back on. Fifteen minutes of that kind of excitement has to wear one out… but how will Edith react to a body on her bedroom floor in the morning? "There's another one. Blighters keep dying in my house for some reason."Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-48651091535323783512013-08-30T13:11:14.022+01:002013-08-30T13:11:14.022+01:00Oh wow, that took a totally unexpected turn! I'...Oh wow, that took a totally unexpected turn! I'm glad the shadow was looking out for Edith's best interests! Won't she be surprised when she wakes up?Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.com