tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post2971419264819814734..comments2024-03-23T15:28:15.198+00:00Comments on Icy's Blunt Pencil: #FridayFlash - After It AllIcy Sedgwickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-31959333870048753552013-10-14T14:25:59.114+01:002013-10-14T14:25:59.114+01:00Your reversion of civilization to nature, red in t...Your reversion of civilization to nature, red in tooth and claw, is beautifully done.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-77113799313204787102013-10-13T18:23:28.064+01:002013-10-13T18:23:28.064+01:00I love the stillness of this piece. But then again...I love the stillness of this piece. But then again I love the mystery of it - has something truly survived and adapted? Cindy Vaskovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747628778627025130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-81809839149323136322013-10-13T01:10:05.675+01:002013-10-13T01:10:05.675+01:00Nice description of abandonment - loved the last l...Nice description of abandonment - loved the last lines "Yet somewhere in the depths of the silence, between the emptiness and the darkness, something moved. <br /><br />Something growled."Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-12748249033563974622013-10-13T00:23:03.125+01:002013-10-13T00:23:03.125+01:00Wonderful setting! I wouldn't want to live the...Wonderful setting! I wouldn't want to live there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-81277028014461930552013-10-12T12:43:50.730+01:002013-10-12T12:43:50.730+01:00Ah, post-apocalyptic, I love it.
Like Deanna, I t...Ah, post-apocalyptic, I love it.<br /><br />Like Deanna, I too would very much like to know more about the growly creature.<br />Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-67404821590805955902013-10-11T16:41:11.077+01:002013-10-11T16:41:11.077+01:00Wonderful setting and description!Wonderful setting and description!Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-61620014334953915292013-10-11T16:24:48.018+01:002013-10-11T16:24:48.018+01:00I hope next week you'll tell us what's gro...I hope next week you'll tell us what's growling Icy. Great, chilling atmosphere in this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-7860808113277028162013-10-11T15:45:01.018+01:002013-10-11T15:45:01.018+01:00Aw, and just when I thought we'd found world p...Aw, and just when I thought we'd found world peace. Everything in a post-mortem slumber. I hope it's the growl of structures about to collapse and not the last thing on earth being unhappy.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-66229816333300831502013-10-11T15:38:24.132+01:002013-10-11T15:38:24.132+01:00I'm with Larry -- this definitely reads like t...I'm with Larry -- this definitely reads like the start of something big. I'm especially taken with the idea that the apocalypse is well over, so instead of hand-wringing over "what happened", the story can just mice back to that growling thing. Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-67530972860114646962013-10-11T15:26:33.408+01:002013-10-11T15:26:33.408+01:00The depiction of emptiness, and nature retaking wh...The depiction of emptiness, and nature retaking what has always been hers, was lush and satisfying all by itself. But that twist at the end... turns it into something different. This could work at the blurb to a novel. What it's about, I have no clue, though. :-)Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396788184066846681.post-71546636062358206412013-10-11T15:20:52.233+01:002013-10-11T15:20:52.233+01:00Something new? I like to think something better, a...Something new? I like to think something better, a change born from the passing of the old. I like the top-down descriptions going into the depths.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.com